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can you please proof read this ...? - 154 - 03-24-2014 04:46 PM

Economic System Project

Germany is a social market economy where which the government has very little involved. Factors of production are largely owned by businesses and individual. Business make decisions about what to produce based on what the consumers want to buy. Consumers have a great impact on what gets produced in a market economy. Societies tend to be divided into “have” and “have not” groups and may conflict within Germany.

thank u =)
(how should i start off with the 2nd paraghraph)


- asianview - 03-24-2014 04:53 PM

Germany is a social market economy (delete 'where') (in) which the government has very little (involvement). Factors of production are largely owned by businesses and (individuals). (Businesses) make decisions about what to produce based on what the consumers want to buy. Consumers have a great impact on what gets produced in a market economy. Societies tend to be divided into “have” and “have not” groups and may conflict within Germany.