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Please give me your criticism on my lyrics? - Alice - 10-15-2012 09:19 PM
I'm thirteen years old and I've started writing songs recently. I was wondering if you could give me an opinion on the lyrics. There's thirteen but you don't have to read them all. You'll have to log in to FB. Be as harsh as you please. Thank you in advance.
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Bloody-Britain/506810929348006?ref=hl
Thanks, I don't know about the lyrics but the music is far from death metal lol
- Cicero - 10-15-2012 09:27 PM
Not bad. Sounds like death metal.
- Jason - 10-15-2012 09:27 PM
I really like your lyrics and think this has potential! If you are looking for constructive feedback from songwriters you should look at http://www.songcrypt.net There are a bunch of writers/musicians that are willing to help you and you could even collaborate on new ideas.