Is the following sentence grammatically correct (punctuations etc)? if not can you please correct it?
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10-14-2012, 08:43 AM
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Is the following sentence grammatically correct (punctuations etc)? if not can you please correct it?
It would be an overstatement if someone says that nowadays people, especially young people reside more in a virtual society, which is made of social media, rather than in the real world.
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10-14-2012, 08:51 AM
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"It would be an overstatement if someone said that nowadays people, especially young people, reside in a virtual society, which is made of social media, rather than in the real world."
This would be correct, if a bit comma-heavy, or you could use the following: "It would be overstating to say that people these days, especially young people, reside in a virtual society of social media rather than the real world." Ads |
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