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Are there any grammatical errors in this piece of writing?
11-27-2012, 06:34 AM
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There are a few. More than the grammatical errors I would say is an error w/ the flow of the piece

I dont know if you intended for this to be an article style or just asking a question but we would need more details like where the topic originated ect.

I would rewrite as;

_Under new government strategies,the website will soon have the capability to identify online bullies and trolls.
_in all hopes, the strategy plans to allow officials to both promptly and accurately identify perps on social networking site such as Facebook.
_as it currently stands, the seemingly effective plan will be delayed,pending proper cooperation and policie from some key social networking sites.
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[] - Corey - 11-27-2012, 06:34 AM
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