Are there any grammatical errors in this piece of writing?
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11-27-2012, 06:34 AM
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There are a few. More than the grammatical errors I would say is an error w/ the flow of the piece
I dont know if you intended for this to be an article style or just asking a question but we would need more details like where the topic originated ect. I would rewrite as; _Under new government strategies,the website will soon have the capability to identify online bullies and trolls. _in all hopes, the strategy plans to allow officials to both promptly and accurately identify perps on social networking site such as Facebook. _as it currently stands, the seemingly effective plan will be delayed,pending proper cooperation and policie from some key social networking sites. |
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Are there any grammatical errors in this piece of writing? - Henry - 11-27-2012, 06:26 AM
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