Hows my cover? be honest! :)?

[Loden]

I hardly think you'll rate this as positive but I'm still going to say it, just see it as constructive criticism if you will. I think you might want to focus on the singing. You basically just stay on a single tone that is slightly out of key except for the parts where you go up or down a bit. It's also a bit unspirited I would say and it looks as if you don't really enjoy it. But you know, just keep on singing and rocking and you'll get better! That's how it works! I'm not saying that you suck or can't sing at all or anything, because you can! Just have to train it!