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Does my prologue draw you in?
12-23-2012, 12:23 AM
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Truth be told it drew me in. Smile I like that suspenseful ending email. Good job Big Grin. A suggestion if I may say : try to add a bit more details on what you characterr is doing.
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Does my prologue draw you in? - hikaru - 12-23-2012, 12:15 AM
[] - CH - 12-23-2012, 12:23 AM
[] - Shannon - 12-23-2012, 12:23 AM
[] - Esmeralda - 12-23-2012 12:23 AM
[] - bree =) - 12-23-2012, 12:23 AM

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