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hey, would you guys read this for me and give me whatever criticism you can?
01-07-2013, 11:19 PM
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Not bad, but then again it's not very good either. Really it's just not my type of thing, but for something that isn't, it is really good. You do however have a lot of punctual mistakes, as well as some of them doesn't make sense. But good luck anyway!! Smile
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