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ATTENTION HIP HOP, R&B AND RAP FANS. Im a young guy with rap aspirations and i need constructive feedback..?
01-16-2013, 10:03 AM
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Overall, out of 10 I would give it an 8. Your flow is good, the way you also speed up your syllables at certain points builds up the excitement in the song. Your lyrics are strong however may need some polishing up. Just a little tip in future, try do these so called 'shout outs' in your songs, it makes it seem un professional like a lot of UK artists. However I know you did not do so in this track so i give you props. It is a good track overall though.
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[] - George III - 01-16-2013, 09:36 AM
[] - Holly - 01-16-2013, 09:44 AM
[] - Gemma - 01-16-2013, 09:49 AM
[] - Ben - 01-16-2013, 09:54 AM
[] - Broadway - 01-16-2013 10:03 AM

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