I need help with some of my story?

[Anime4Life]

how about Star-Cross acadamy?
as for classes:
hunting
hiking
dueling
wolf language (they coould have their own native language)
weight training
track
control (being one with your wolf-self)

and finially for Cartel they could have run into an issue with her grandfather which is why hes dead. maybe he has found something they did not want him to find? what if Hadlee is not your average half wolf? what if her mother had a secret of her own?

this story sounds very interesting and i would LOVE to read it someday! do you have a twitter account? maybe you can keep me updated about it!