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Does this sound like a good letter?
01-24-2013, 03:02 AM
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You want criticism, ok: You start off by saying that you don't want to sound like a fan, then the second sentence you say that you are a fan. Then you run on about Glee so much that it doesn't make sense. Try breaking that question up into two sentences, or questions. Forget about the late birthday, I'm sure he has. Reply? To what? That you're a gushy school girl? You don't know him, leave it at that.
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