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Can you help me edit this paragraph?
02-13-2013, 02:10 AM
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Trevor Offline

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1. Instead of "That set the laptop-using group’s....." try "This set the laptop-using group’s"
2. Used a comma instead of a colon for: Ruben Musca, who says,“If the....
3. You said: "Many teachers and professors have say that..." Correct: "Many teachers and professors have said that..."
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