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Masters of English literature, is the following paragraph correct? No grammar or punctuations errors?
02-17-2013, 11:59 AM
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...Yemen in late [remove OF]...

..of THE Egyptian...

...to pour INTO THE street, but also to stay there.

...undoubtedly HELPED [you're in the past tense in this para]

...such as [remove THE] Facebook...were among THE other tools [remove THAT] used...

DICTATOR [remove 'S] ...

For weeks [add comma]...

In late March 2011, after 51 people had been killed, Saudi Arabia, the United States, and the United Nations became heavily involved with the Yemeni situation.

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[] - Dawn - 02-17-2013 11:59 AM
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