so, could this girl like me?

[Dick]

Hello, I'd just like to announce that I'm taking over this question to ask for feedback for a rap song I wrote. Everyone please tell me what you think.

I just started working on my rapping career. As you can tell I'm the best but I just wanted to get some verification to make sure I'm not better than I thought. Thanks for any opinions.

[Verse 1]
Yo, what be crackin
Every girl I meet be jackin
off about me when they get home
I'm a star while you're just unknown
Eat my penis punk
Or I'll send your a s s to venus punk
If your girl talks back I'll beat her up

[Verse 2]
Kid, who you think you confrontin
you best start running fore you push my buttons
I'll spit in your face, leave you disgraced up in it
and take your wallet though it's half what I make a minute
I got h o es left and right
but i still bum your mom every night
no one's close to where I be
in fact I got some words for the almighty
you can suck my d i ck b i tch if you gotz a prob
Lord knows I could kick your a ss at your own job
No pun intended
f u ck those who get offended
just get used to it, I'm wreckless

[Verse 3]
so step to it jack
or I'll leave your face cracked
Last night I met your daughter in a bar
did her good after I took her home in my car
see when it comes down to it, I'm like the R
or maybe even better in fact definitely
I'm better than you infinitely
you can't step to it let alone diss me
so just shut up while you watch your girl kiss me