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This is my intro for my speech on why I prefer twitter over Facebook.

ill admit when I first signed up for twitter, i didnt get it at all. If anything it seemed like a downgraded version of Facebook to me. I was always wondering why you couldn't attach photos, videos, or songs whenever you posted something or where you find people to follow. But once i figured out how to do that it made alot more sense to me. And today i actually prefer twitter to Facebook. Mr. ****** and classmates im going to talk about why I prefer twitter over Facebook.

Im in grade 8 btw. Just opinions on it , improvements or if it should be longer