Tips for facebook page?

[Brain Freeze]

1. The ABOUT page need serious renovation:

About
This page is a cause for all children and disadvantaged young [animals? Your target audience is too wide. Teens aren't going to want to know what little kiddies like. Besides. Most of your stuff looks like random current events about gays or something to do with bullying. Your page is not really for the children IMO....], Every like this page has is dedicated to all Children who are different [total cr@p - delete. What is different anyway? Growing a penis on one's head or having a pimple on one's cheek?], Children who are going through a bad time [what kind of bad time?]. These Children still deserve a place in this world [According to you? Who the hell cares what 1 person thinks unless you have some kind of authority over the subject].
Mission
For The Childrenâ„¢ Is not a mission but a ongoing one, What we'd like to see is people liking this page so that Children all across the world know that they're Cared,Wanted,Understood,Liked and Accepted for who they're not what people expect them too be. [1. You are writing like an idiot. Firstly, a mission is an overall goal. A goal is something to work for. 2. Duh!]

We'd like to get our page out there to the world for them do understand what being a oadolescence [spelling!] teen/child is like [what the hell is a teen/child? Some kind of mutant?], If you'd be kind enough to support out page like our page by hitting that like button [Duh! Whiny and irritating. you carry on begging people to like instead of focusing on something that actually means something. Desperate. Be interesting, informative and intelligent. Not whiny.]

Select share from the menu in the upper-right corner of the Page. You'll see a pop-up window that lets you choose how and with whom you want to share with. [Delete this bull]

Description
ForTheChildren13â„¢ Is a privately owned page made for people too show their support to disadvantaged Children all over the world, They're children [relevance?] and their [they're] the future of this planet. [Delete all]
General information
Please like our page to show support to children short or tall that they are cared for, A like means you raise your hands as a pledge to stop bullying and you will stand up for children who are different [Desperate. THIS IS NOT GENERAL INFO]

Their are 2 types of bullying: -

#1 People who bully people for being different
#2 People who see bullying happen and don't do anything about it
[This is for idiots, right? Leave this stuff off the ABOUT]

Your whole ABOUT needs to be rewritten. People don't want to read this sort of trashy tween whining.

2. Change your profile pic so it is different from your cover pic.

3. Is everything you post about children. How much of your stuff is really suited for your target audiences. Which is it? Parents, teenagers, tweens or children, etc. Shall we post sponge bob the one day, pregnancy the next and Obama on Wednesdays, etc?

Your page is losing likes because you have no focus. your content is random and disorderly. You have no serious vision of what you want to accomplish with this page or else you are struggling to express it. It sounds to me as though you should rather make a page on bullying because that's what it it seems you are interested in and focus it on mostly teenagers because that is where bullying happens the most (or perhaps gay teens?).

@ Brok - I realize that I probably came off as sounding rude, but what I meant to say was basically the following in terms of the first argument:
- spelling, grammar and wording issues.
- Repetition of information and requests which people would naturally do if they found your group interesting.
- A disparity between what your page stands for and what you post and present to your "fans".

I do not agree with you in terms of the mission. There is always potential to do better. If you can't look ahead to the future than you are stuck in a rut and an illusion. No-one can help you with that unfortunately.

I hope you are able to achieve whatever you set out to do. All the best.

~ Brain Freeze

* I'm also wondering if English is your second language because that might explain your confusion with certain things I'm saying to you.