Please grade my SAT essay!! (10 pts to best answer!!)?
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10-14-2012, 01:23 AM
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You answered the question that they wanted but you didn't put your own personal opinion into it. Upon reading your essay it feels as if you writing this objectively instead of personally as it is prompted, you are asking to many what ifs. I recommend you put more of your personal opinion into. Remember the person reading your essay is probably reading hundreds write emotionally and straight to the prompt, which is a vital skill needed in college.
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Please grade my SAT essay!! (10 pts to best answer!!)? - Johnny - 10-14-2012, 01:15 AM
[] - Kale - 10-14-2012 01:23 AM
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