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I need help correcting these grammar senetces.?
02-19-2014, 12:50 PM
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1, Change it's to its. because "it's" is "it is" and in this sentence we need a possessive pronoun.

2. There should be a semi colon or a period instead of the comma between site and Twitter. It is a run-on otherwise.

3. Children's*. To show possession of the toy.

4.I believe that sentence is correct.

5. Correct. Remove "completely" for a less wordy sentence as unable alone can convey the similar meaning of complete.
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