Is this an Interesting start to a story?
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02-19-2014, 12:57 PM
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It is REALLY good, i enjoyed reading it so much and I'll be so happy if you tell me where i can read the rest. let me tell you something, if i were you i made the first chapter more mysterious and then slowly started to make things clear. But I'm not you and i have no idea what's on your mind. Keep on writing you're really really talented. I look forward to hear from you for the next chapter.
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Is this an Interesting start to a story? - Ami - 02-19-2014, 12:47 PM
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