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Will you read this preview of my book I'm writing and follow me on twitter?
10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
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i don't really like when u wrote about him fighting with his dad. His dad couldn't be in a good enough shape to yell like that. And you really need to fix ur grammar. But i liked the beginning.
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[] - cathrl69 - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
[] - luvgal21 - 10-14-2012 03:17 PM
[] - jl - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
[] - Rebecca - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
[] - Becca White - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM

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