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Will you read this preview of my book I'm writing and follow me on twitter?
10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
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No. You really need to learn about punctuation, that was very difficult to follow. Also I find the characters to be stupid. Why would anyone blame an accident on the kid for calling? How was he supposed to know the dad was driving? It would be the dad's fault for picking up the phone... no one is forced to answer the phone while driving. The fight was completely over the top and if the dad was in such bad shape how was he even able to yell like that... No, I didn't like it at all.
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[] - cathrl69 - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
[] - luvgal21 - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
[] - jl - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM
[] - Rebecca - 10-14-2012 03:17 PM
[] - Becca White - 10-14-2012, 03:17 PM

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