Please fix my essay for me! Thanks. I'll give yo 5 stars?

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WOW great job you put a lot of thought into that..ok just a few things

I would change...all the kid (s) to children or child

I would write parent education..parent workshops..where parents can not only learn new techniques to parenting but assist new parents with such issues as brain development and feeding nutrition child care in the early years and later such topics as..puberty, social media and use, as well as appropriate dating and college bond children. "empty nest"

second paragraph...I would stick to American culture that is too much of a swing..from one culture to another...for instances, Maybe a family has generations of living off government assistances, lack proper nutrition and health issues, through parent education one could break the cycle and be educated about proper nutrition, health care and even return to school for a degree to be able to support themselves and family breaking the cycle of government assistance

in conclusion, parent education could benefit everyone involved and happy children grow happy and healthy and have less issues into adulthood.

ok this was fun email me anytime happy to help.

last line first paragraph..."practice"...although I know spell check would grab that