Is this a good character and conflict?

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You've set up a nice power structure there with a segregated academy, which she then upsets with determination and resolve. This has a G.I Jane in the fantasy realm feel, and that's a very encouraging thing to see with all the late mysoginism of the Twilight series, to name but one abomination in the history of recent fiction. It's not however, a massive source of internal conflict in my mind, as I think women, like men, are capable of managing both a family and a career. If it is a source of conflict, then it's one experienced by both women and men. I have to say that I do feel that there are more pressing issues for women right now, such as how we still have a wage disparity and how social media is systematically destroying the work of every feminist movement we've ever seen.. But this has a great deal of potential.