Proof read this for me?

[Xoxo_Love1994]

" I could slip on my pajamas and stay in bed till morning, " <--- make that comma a period.

"When I got home and turned on my ipod not one of the 3 familiar [...]" <--- put a comma after ipod

"My heart literally skipped a beat, internet was important to me [...]" <--- put a period after the word "me".

--> I fixed this section for you---> " I imagined what life would be like in china, or what the first man on the moon thought when his foot didn’t touch the surface quiet as fast as he had pictured. I then imagined how much better my life would be if I would just change some of the little things (like the amount of time I was on the internet for example)".

"My thoughts grew and grew till my mind just couldn’t hold them any longer" <--- put a period after "longer"


"At first it wasn’t much but before long" M--- put a comma after "long"



Pretty good what you have so far! Just some grammar issues.. Hope I helped