Can someone please check my English writing?

[Steven M]

okay


In February 2010, a mere six years after its initial launch in 2004, Facebook reached over 400 million active users on the site.
Clearly, Facebook is an integral part of many people’s lives. So much so, in fact, that many people cannot fathom life without it.

These days Facebook is not only available on personal computers, but also through most mobile devices like cellphones, iphones etc.
The habit of logging on Facebook has blinded most of its users, cancelling their awareness of the negative effects of using it.
First of all, Facebook endangers your privacy. Facebook is in the public domain and there will be people who will be viewing your profile- not only your friends and family could know what is happening in your life, but also strangers who can use your information against you and for their own benefits.

The users of Facebook are not safe, this social networking site is harmful for one’s privacy and exposes your personal information such as relationship status and social contacts to the general public.
In addition, Facebook results addiction- people are constantly logged on it, because it is reachable and they can use it almost everywhere.

People wake up early in the morning and run to their computers in order to check up on any new notifications and status updates their friends have made.
They don’t bother leaving their houses and make new friends, spend time with their families, or keep in touch with the outside world.
The addiction can start from an early age, which makes a large decrease in real-life social interacting.


That is a few corrections,
Not Sure what you meant by "Veachable" But I put Reachable in
It is a little clumsy use of language but almost makes sense.