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Do you like my story so far?
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04-08-2014, 08:37 PM
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Try to use words other than just vision, repetition isn't always good. It's also a very advanced and sensitive issue, it might be hard to write in a way that would come across to a reader. But it's still great so far!
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Do you like my story so far? - Abbey - 04-08-2014, 08:33 PM
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