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I just made a blog. Is it any good?
04-08-2014, 08:57 PM
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Its interesting and Great for a first effort. Just a few mistakes and words missing for example
" And, in order to get all the benefits (missing words here) egg yolks provide, " "of the" missing ! It is only small but as it is almost the first thing you read it makes it look just a little amateurish. Sorry this is meant to be constructive.
Good luck.
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