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Korean question?
04-09-2014, 05:17 PM
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I'd suggest you change 내가 to 제가. 내가 is the informal form of 제가. Also 우리 is the informal form of 저희, so you might want to consider changing that, too. Even though it's quite common to hear people use formal speech and informal speech mixed together, in this case it sounds quite awkward and is grammatically wrong.

Other than that, it sounds okay to me!

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