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Is this an interesting plot for a YA novel?
05-09-2014, 03:11 PM
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It's very complex in a sense that a lot is happening and they shouldnt.

the whole pregnancy thing is good, but its not really fit for this novel. and the whole grant being a "super soldier" with his power and all is just like... what????

its complicated and you need to work it out more, and simplify it!

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[] - Madison - 05-09-2014, 02:58 PM
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