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Is the following short English message or statement correct grammatically and polite?
11-09-2012, 09:03 AM
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You are doing very well with your English! Here is what I would advise you to write. (I made up the name Ryan)

"Since today was your last day of school, I would just like to say it was very nice to know you and Ryan first, and it was nice to study with you. I wish you all the best and I hope we can stay in touch. I wish to see you again in the near future."

Some of your wording was a bit awkward, I hope I helped!
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[] - Salt and Peppy - 11-09-2012, 09:03 AM
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