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Can you rate my SAT essay?
11-09-2012, 09:04 AM
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your concepts are fairly good, but the actual writing needs quite a bit of work.

its an essay, not a conversation. leave out all the 'my mind' and 'i saw' stuff.

publicity is misused both times.

'those boys' is way way too vague

your banking examples, also way too vague

you have no historical or literary example at all

I'd likely give it a 3 out of 6 as a grader but I think you have the ability to get a 5 or 6 out of 6 if you learn to write what the graders are looking for.
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Can you rate my SAT essay? - Cao - 11-09-2012, 08:55 AM
[] - Batgirl - 11-09-2012 09:04 AM

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