Is our band's original song good?

[Elly]

I didnt listen to the whole thing, only the first minute but this is what im going to say:
I like the beat and the music even though you guys sort of messed up
but the singer was overpowered by the music... it should be the opposite or they should even each other out. I couldnt even understand what the singer was saying.
Also, songs are better when they are filled with emotion and this song wasnt really filled with anything, it was more dull.
-The singer needs to work a little bit more
-You guys made a few mistakes
- The singer was overpowered
work on those but otherwise you guys are good!!
Good luck, hope to see you guys singing on TV one day (: