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[Donald]

Firstly, work preparation enables students to gain an edge over other competitors in job market. The preparation will allow students shift the role smoothly from college to society by foreseeing the occupational issues relevant with code of conduct, skills in the interview and so on. According to a recent survey conducted by CASS (Chinese Academy of Social Science), after a poll of the staff from the Human Resource Department of Transnational Enterprises: most respondents claimed that a candidate who has acquired a good knowledge of vocational preparation is always more competitive to get the position than another who shows the same performance at school but has nothing beside the textbook. Thus to some extent, the professional preparation is instrumental for a graduate in the job interview.

Secondly, high employment rate is beneficial to the university's reputation. A university’s most valuable characteristic is its reputation. Naturally, by publishing a nearly hundred percent employment rate on the homepage of its website, not only does the college enhance the position in higher educational ranking, but it also boosts the enrollment of new session because of the powerful attraction. It is hard to imagine students from a prestigious university will wander around their early twenties, paying rent, reading classifieds and wondering why the lights were not turning green for themselves. Therefore, at times like this preparation does matter.

Thirdly, well-prepared students allow companies to cut training fees. A freshman who suffers the shock of a “Culture of Enterprise” would impose financial burden on employee's training. My older brother is a good case in point. He used to attend a class aimed at job preparation for a graduate. After the training, he almost fostered the social skills and traits which would build up the sense of belonging with his later admirable company. Without an employee’s training, his boss could afford a costly course in MBA (Master of Business Administration) for him, using the original fees of training. It is a large sum of money that is spent on training fees. It seems clear to me that well-preparation enables companies to avoid loss of money through fees.

All in all, consider the benefits on individuals, universities, and companies because it is crucial to give work preparation to students before graduation.