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My First Stand-Up Lines?
03-06-2014, 01:40 AM
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i think it was quite good for a first try. some of the material was on the borderline of being offensive which is the key to good comedy as long as you don't cross the line. Also, i liked the jokes but it seems that you keep jumping topics very quickly.

Overall - Very good but just needs some finishing touches!
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My First Stand-Up Lines? - 767 - 03-06-2014, 01:28 AM
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