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(Writers) Do you like this short paragraph?
03-30-2014, 03:30 PM
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I'm not a writer, but did you forget the word "the" between "from" and "arena" in the first paragraph?

It's a good short paragraph, though. The short sentences do make it fast paced. Kudos for you!
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[] - OceanFreak - 03-30-2014, 03:25 PM
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