(Writers) Do you like this short paragraph?
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03-30-2014, 03:31 PM
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Sounds good to me. It's a nice hook if it's the beginning. I can't offer you anything else since you know the problem and this isn't the final thing that you're ready to have people criticize.
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(Writers) Do you like this short paragraph? - DRAGON ☠- 03-30-2014, 03:15 PM
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