What's wrong about my writing?

[lawlman91]

How do I make it more clear/enjoyable to read?

Here goes:
Stab.

A hooded creeper, who stood beneath a streetlight, gasped and then fell. Crickets chirped upon a silent neighborhood as a teenage girl, dressed in black, jerked her sword from the body and into her scabbard.

A male high school student stood nearby, shocked. He lifted his hands up as if in surrender, and said, “Um… I got nothing.”

The girl’s mean and serious eyes pierced the male, and then she declared, “No, you do have something.”

No car passed by and no doors opened. Only flickering streetlights accompanied the two. Aside from the dead body.

The boy gave a questioning look.

She pointed the sword at his chest and said, “You’re attractive, I’ll tell you that.”

“Huh?”

The girl looked pissed, “I don’t mean it in the way you thought.”