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Banner headline and sub headline for electrician for website appealing to their fears concern&emotion?
04-08-2014, 04:23 AM
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Those lines seem too wordy, apparently to appear on a web site, you ave to be concerned with people's short attention spans.

"a way tailored to your needs" seems like pure filler text more suitable to home redecorating, again there is no word quota.


If it were an inner article and not the the title page you could simplify it to:

3 Question to Ask Before You End Up In the Dark.
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place the electrician info after the 3 questions.

You would have to mention the sort of site host or provide a link to your site to get any specific answers on changing buttons.
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