Is this direct enough? for my a- level course work i have to write a newspaper article on bullying .?
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03-19-2013, 09:38 AM
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It is direct but not well-written I'm afraid.
I suggest you read it yourself again and ask if you are happy with the use of words and punctuation. |
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Is this direct enough? for my a- level course work i have to write a newspaper article on bullying .? - Lauren - 03-19-2013, 09:26 AM
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