what u think about this quote?

[Zara]

"being mature has nothing to do with your age,its when you are young and aware of everyone's real face"
how can i make it more effective cz i feel theres smthing missing,i want to speak my heart out through this quote n ths is gonna b my fb timeline,need sm good suggestions :/

[Serendipity]

I will try not to be the middle-age skolmarm and point out what's missing ie. grammar, punctuation, spelling....just narky cos still puzzled @ fb timeline....not bloody Facebook issit?!

Er...would argue @ being nothing to do with your age though I know you mean you can be young and a mature person - I'm mature but in the aging cheese sense - change the nothing to is more than to do with...

DO like the everyone's real face thing though - new English can say more than old (sometimes). Reminds of of Tom B**t*rd Wotsisname who said I'd eyes that could see right through him - still not sure if he meant laser, protruding stary ones or my preference - mature knowing I-can-read-your-mind ones (which regrettably I'd forgotten to do though his mind was written permanently all over his leery face)...

Okaaay - C-O-N-C-E-N-T-R-A-T-E.........you are saying you can read people and see them for what they are - that might get their back up since they know all their guilty secrets - change to see them as they are - see and accept them as they are??

It's my bedtime and they're locking all the doors.. just remember some are good at sensing who people are but we can all be fooled in person, and online it's an absolute cinch - all you have to go on are the words - and pictures which are constructed - enjoy but take care!