how is this crazy intro paragraph?!! Tell me!?

[Adele]

The word courage is a powerful, mind boggling adjective that defies the impact of almost every other word in the dictionary. It is tacked on to the prestigious titles of those who are highly regarded and well respected. Celebrities of courage are printed all over our newspapers, our books, and our media, and are thought of as saviors by those who believe in their cause, or those who simply admire them. But despite the millions of people recognized for their bravery in even the slightest aspect, there are still those who go unnoticed. In reality, it is not a person’s physical or mental capabilities, or an act of “saving the world”  that realistically defines courage, but the CHOICES they choose to make, their mental, social or physical suffering, all in a fight for what they believe in. The most powerful examples of courage in To Kill A Mockingbird is that of Mrs. Dubose and that of her neighbor, Atticus Finch, a wide display of bravery that was selfless in many ways.

[Carlos]

It is not crazy.

[XTX]

ADELE this goes back to the 7&1/2 pages --- my suggestion to you is to make an outline of the subject matter and try to make it interesting to the reader === provide some background and tell the story .... read some children books like those ""little golden books"" -- if you put one of those stories on two type written pages you would see that it is just simple and yet informative.. excuse this [[ and my nose into your best answer ]] this is only meant to help you and get you to think how to shorten and tell your facts of your paper .... use of some inet reference and following the guidelines from the "teacher" will make your homework easier --- make your point at the close and just lead your narrative to that end ....