Does this sound readable?

[Lights]

I m working on a superhero story and would like to know if this sounds good. Serious answers only, please. Warrior Enterprises is a high tech corporation who protects earth through its super powered agents. In Manhattan is a group of four heroes. There's Furnace, a flying fire manipulator with superhuman senses. Venus, a girl who gets her healing factor and flight from an Aztec amulet blessed by an ancient God. Tank, a super strong and invulnerable mutant. White Dragon, a ninja-like hero with super speed and precognition. Then a darker hero known as Silhouette, who can manipulate shadows and talk to the dead due to a chemical lab explosion that nearly killed her, comes out of hiding to warn of a doomsday device being built by the villain Crossfire. They have to learn how to work together to stop Crossfire and the Fearless Five.

[Jeffrey]

I think it is awesome.

If you want to collaborate with me, I can provide you with 'web comic' artwork if you can contact me.

Contact me on http://Facebook.com/frailminds

I didn't post any of my comic artwork yet because I need to find the creative juices and time to render them, however, I have sketches drawn out.

I will not take any credit when it comes to writing the stories, nor will I try to scam you in any way as I will do it for FREE and for FUN, but I will take credibility for the artwork. ^_^