Care to help me with a short biography?

[Erica]

Hi, Ineed help making a bio for my social media sites ( tumblr, devaintart, etc) . Here are a few things about me that might help you out !
Im 14, i live in canada, and i love animals
I love to read and right, and english has always been my favorite subject. My parents are divorced and i have 2 brothers and a sister. I love music, mostly all types of it but i favour alternative rock, with the exception of miley cyrus. i have 6 beautiful cats who i cant imagine life without. when im in the mood, i could sit down and paint forever. i play baseball and i love to take pictures. i have a few amazing friends who i couldnt live without. my favorite colors are blue purple and orange and i love to talk to new people. Im curious and id love to travel all around the world and start collecting something but i have no idea what. I love accessories, and i can be shy at first until you get to know me

i dont want it to sound corny or anything but id like some help on how i should lay this out and make it sound as mature as possible..
thank you ...xxx
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[Aj]

My name is [ ]. I was born on [ 1999]. I now live in [ , Canada],
I grew up in [ ] and went to [ kindergarten]. I then attend [ primary school] which I finished in. I'm now in [ ] grade and of the [ high school]. English is my favorite subject there.
I love to read and write (not "right"). , My parents are divorced and i have 2 brothers and a sister.
I love music, mostly all types of it but i prefer alternative rock, with the exception of Miley Cyrus.
I love animals. I have 6 beautiful cats who i cant imagine living without. I also love to paint. When I'm in the mood I could sit down and paint forever. I furthermore play baseball and i love to take pictures. I have a few amazing friends who cherish dearly. My favorite colors are blue, purple and orange and I love meeting new people. I'm curious and I would love to travel all around the world and start a collection of some sort. I also love accessories. I can be shy at first but once you get to know me better I can loosen up.

Hope this helps.