How to word this paragraph correctly?

[saxy d]

I can not word paragraph 3 correctly to make it a fluent paragraph. Please help me by wording it correctly and correct any necessary grammar or sentence structure errors..
For the commercial ""Beach Tweet: Diet Pepsi Commercial Starring Sofia Vergara and David Beckham"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=FEFI-_Sg5G0

1.Pepsi's Diet Pepsi commercial features Sofia Vergara, a Colombian actress, and David Beckam , a British soccer star, to sell their product. At the beginning of commercial, Sofia Verger is seen laying on a beach chair, fanning herself from the heat. Thirst for liquid, she looked around and saw a young lady drinking a can of ice cold diet Pepsi. She is eager for one, but the line at the vendor is abnormally long. Using her handy tool of Twitter, she tweets a lie; “At the pier...just saw David Beckham!(Beach Tweet).” Surprisingly, everyone on the scene gets the tweet and rush to the pier in the hopes of seeing Beckham. With everyone gone, she went for a can of refreshing diet Pepsi. Refreshed, Beckham walks over to pick up his soccer ball and asks her “What's going on over there?” Pepsi targeted young females as the main audience of this commercial. Nearly all casting are females in their 20's, healthy, fit, and sexy. Pepsi cleverly used all three appeals: ethos, logos, and pathos.
2.When one is asked to think of a soft drink, more often than not the Pepsi franchise comes to mind. Pepsi is a prominent leader in the beverage market. “Ranking as the 43rd largest company on Fortune 500 and the largest beverage company in the world(Pepsi History)” is impressive enough to attract consumers. Diet Pepsi is a trademarked product of PepsiCo, Inc that has “stood the test of time since 1898(Pepsi History).” The fame of David Beckham and Sofia Vergara bring a sense of reliability to product. Fans adore products their idols promote and will often buy that product to test it out. The scene from the commercial provides evidence of this; after Sofia tweets that she saw Beckham at the pier, everyone rushes over immediately. Pepsi wants their audience to see it as a trustworthy, reliable, trendy, and all-round exciting company.
3.Pepsi recognizes its audience and plays toward their interests very wisely. The logic of the ad states that diet Pepsi is most refreshing soft drink in the world and drinking it buys fitness motivation and self-worthiness. The silver aluminum diet Pepsi can shines like a star that attracts all incomers like a sexy women. A scale is seem hanging on the pole of the vendor shop scales at 90, an ideal weight or percentage perhaps? Sofia is willing to lie to her fans on twitter just to get one. Her relief facial expression from heat with help of her can of diet Pepsi is priceless. “Nothing refreshes like a diet Pepsi(Beach Tweet).” David Beckham's role at the end add support the idea of drink this, become fit, and get handsome men and it as almost a wish grant true. In the commercial, everyone buy and drink diet Pepsi only.

thank you.

[worldisone]

it looks good.