Is this ad good(grammar)?

[Silverado biotch]

Ok I'm having a "model search" for my university students and alumni and forming a group to showcase these fine ladies.Anyway the ad i written up below what do you guys think.This is for facebook and *) are to blank out sensitive material for privacy.





****** *****2014 Model Search. Send us your photo to our Facebook fan page,and include your bio.All submissions have to be former ************ students or alumni.

Our ********winners will be apart of the **** ************crew and be showcased as one of hottest students to come out of our university.You will enjoy a photo shoot for the 2014 *** ***********calender.And be expected to party and promote various products and events all year long.Dont miss out!
Commas,,,, ,,

[puresweetmelody]

****** ***** 2014 Model Search. Send us your photo to our Facebook fan page and include your bio. All submissions have to be former ************ students or alumni.

Our ******** winners will be a part of the **** ************ crew and will be showcase as one of the hottest students to come out of our university.You will enjoy a photo shoot for the 2014 *** *********** calender. Be expected to party and promote various products and events all year long. Don't miss out!