Can someone review this site?

[Breaker Breaker]

i create this site for a pub/restaurant place and need to know what the public thinks of it, tell me about the Looks, is it informative?, it is relevant, any spelling errors and bad grammar let me know...

link: http://www.babbitybowster.com/

-Cheers

[blisteringlogic]

In this sentence "As the original building was constructed in 1790 it seems fitting to have supplied the restored building with an 18th century Scottish name." You need a comma after '1790'.

And for this "'Babbity Bowster' was a dance at the time 'Babbity' being the 'bob' at the and Bowster being a bolster or large pillow." You need a period and new sentence after the world 'time'.

Other than that, it looks like a clean nicely designed website. If I ever find myself in Scotland, I'll look you guys up.

[Skalli]

It looks lovely. All links work. Pages load extremely quickly. Nice photos, not over done. No spelling errors. Descriptive, engaging, interesting. A nice crisp and clean site. Nice job!

[Jake]

It may sound dumb, but in some cases you only have 10 seconds to grab a visitor's attention, you might spell out Hotel and Restaurant right in the top sub-header.

I assume there in more introduction in the works.

That bit of humor might not go over well with some

"We will leave you to decide who may have performed a bobbing dance at the edge of the bed and for what reasons..."

[john]

maybe a bit too white...possibly.
http://www.babbitybowster.com/restaurant
this page has a bit too much white space after the 3 pictures - i would like to close that up a little.
In the recommended sections i would like them to be links to show where they have been recommended...if possible.
Tel: 01415 525 055 • Email us
the email link - isn't an e-mail link - it is a contact form - so you should say contact us rather than e-mail us.
In the titles of the pages rather than put "babbity bowster - restaurant". i would put "babbity bowster restaurant" without the hyphen....i think it might be better for SEO.

http://babbitybowster.com/cafe_bar

looks like you've messed up the HTML here:
A place to relax, read a book, chat with pals or meet new friends - a conversation bar with no distractions. p>

i think it should be a closing </p> tag.
your events page asks you to go to facebook - surely all your events should be on your webpage? Why should the user have to click twice to get to the events.

it has an external link to:
Created by: Moshe Mangena
i would remove this as you are sending people away to this site. which is not relevant to pubs - web design has nothing to do with a pub.
The website has no people in it - where are the people enjoying themselves - zero character.

on this page:
http://babbitybowster.com/restaurant

it says:Email us through contact page but if you wish for a faster reply please call our telephone number at (0141) 552 5055.
It should say:
Email us through OUR contact page but if you wish for a faster reply please call our telephone number at (0141) 552 5055.

By the way is "Scottische" actually a word - I thought it was Scottish?

Looking at your code:
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<p style="display:none">
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</p>
<!-- END OF HIT COUNTER CODE -->
Not sure how useful this hit counter code is...so you might want to reduce your javascript codes to make the page load faster etc.

as you have more stats here at the end:
<!-- Hosting24 Analytics Code -->
<script type="text/javascript" src="http://stats.hosting24.com/count.php"></script>
<!-- End Of Analytics Code -->

How much stats d oyou need?

That should keep you going....