How can I make this ad flow nicee?

[Tzila B]

This is what we have so far. We want to add how we painted the driveway pink when she was born because she was born after 3 boys.
We feel like the letter isn't flowing nicely..

Congratulations upon reaching this milestone in your life.

We remember your first steps, your first word, and the first time you finally left Mom’s side.

It has been a blessing for us to watch you mature from a little girl into a beautiful young woman.

Your radiance and enthusiasm touch everyone you come in contact with.

May your confidence, humor, compassion and unwavering determination lead you to a future filled with happiness and success.

Love always, (parents and siblings)

[Ed Atun]

Don't change a word. It is written perfectly.... and from the heart. You could say that there are still some faint marks from where you painted the driveway pink.......