need advice with my website?

[Michael Zarad]

its best-cheap-sales.com im only 21 check it out let me know if I can have a better website name and how I can get traffic and other things thanks!

[Richard]

domain - having dashes means you might have competitors with a generic name. this could cause confusion. Be specific with it and consider a unique branding name. Don't worry too much aboout keywords. It's the brand that will carry your business eventually.
SEO - lots of on page factors overlooked
marketing style - Looks fair but lacks enticing text such as benefits and irresistible offers.
design - might work, might not.. depends on who sees it. some parts don't load well on other browsers

so different point of views rating (out of 10)

normal online user with no marketing background - 8
SEO specialist - 6
Internet marketer - 6
Web designer - 5

Lots of rooms for improvement but don't worry, at least you got started on something that you can simply tweak. Finally, you're in a great niche - pretty profitable as I search about it.

[duke the champ]

Change the URL . I am not even going to look at the website because of the URL you have chosen...even if you got this website ranking in google, it is very unlikely users will actually click on you if that is the domain. Stage one is having something that is clickable.

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