How to word this flyer?

[David]

I am just trying to make a flyer that will attract local people. I'd like to grab a couple of clients and make their online store websites for free just to have a portfolio and get some confidence in doing that particular type of work.

I can't show the design here but can anyone please advise me on the wording only.. in your opinion.

Is this ideal or would you change anything about it:




Dublin City

Free eCommerce Shop Project

Are you considering paying professions to set up and online store for you? Currently we are developing our portfolio and looking for some clients, so if you have been thinking about having your own online store for a while and would like to find out more then please contact us.

Email: emailaddress@gmail.com
Call: 087 3625342



Thanks.

[Georgina]

Are you a local business?
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[kate]

In a place where there is lots of people, like a shopping centre.