Need help with my blog?

[Lore]

I started a blog a while back and have had little success with it. I would just like to get recommendations on what I could be doing better and would like some feedback on my writing and any areas where I may be able to improve. I would appreciate any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism that anyone is willing to give.

This is the link... http://lorenapozos.wordpress.com/2013/05...drugstore/

I wrote this particular post because I'm wanting to take my blog in a different direction. Please let me know what you think.

[Vulgarman514]

For help with writing blogs please take a look at my answer at this link:

http://ca.answers.yahoo.com/question/ind...902AA4e65b

[Mary]

I really like it! I like how it's not boring and you really do reach out to your readers with your language. I honestly can't think of any constructive criticism...

Thanks for answering my question! I really appreciate it!