Can someone check out my blog and tell me what should I improve?

[Mariela]

I started out my blog a few months ago and really want to make it good to have peope actually read and like it and I'm working on making a better banner and I need help on how to improve it http://www.marrielaalvarez.blogspot.com

[wowpow32]

i think its pretty good how it is, my suggestion is you try to expose it and get as many viewers as you can, post flyers do something and make an intersting adverstisement, have your friends spread it by word of mouth.

[MADLUV]

it does need some work.
- smaller photographs so the images don't go over them.
- as a person who is clueless on fashion and stuff. showing me 3 images of the same bottle of nail polished zoomed in and out (as cool as it is it sort of turned me off.) now showing the nail polish then open the bottle and then on your nails AWESOME
sort of liek your other images jacket open jacket closed. a few other poses. Even then remember less is more.

but i'm a photographer so that's the part i tend to gravitate to. I didn't even notice much words minus the ones that were over the photograph one page one.
My setting is large font.

[Jake]

Search engines would like to see longer text, a "full size" article would be 450+ words, I get your are not in the in depth article biz but search engines feed of lots of unique phrases.

I would probably not shoot too many pictures in the dirt, try to find more sophisticated up town backdrops. Pictures are a bit lacking in detail. While you don't want huge image files slowing load time, you might look into making a click show a blown up version.

[Ankit]

You should regular submit your business content and information in blog as well as spread your blogs in social media market.

[Jonathan]

Promote your blog on social networking sites.